tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4996632091300076185.post4945813321766557879..comments2023-08-19T03:26:52.450-07:00Comments on Wanderlust and Rambling: Chapter Four-Beyond The Seven SeasRisshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16582122840116012400noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4996632091300076185.post-5009538860887902622008-07-24T14:54:00.000-07:002008-07-24T14:54:00.000-07:00Love the story! I found a few of the parts a littl...Love the story! I found a few of the parts a little difficult to follow as to who as speaking. I'm waiting to hear where the 8 women come back into the story and what role they will play. They almost sound like some sort of guardian/watcher organization. There are some great lines in this story! The descriptiveness is really good. The first chapter might have been a little heavy on the description in balance with the importance of her apartment in the story, but made it easy to imagine. Overall I was hooked from the beginning. This story could go any which way from here! Can't wait to read the rest. It's a hell of a lot better than anything I have ever done. :)MelanieHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346364619914837225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4996632091300076185.post-9360171256326386362008-04-24T04:01:00.000-07:002008-04-24T04:01:00.000-07:00Thanks.That makes two of us (c:Thanks.<BR/><BR/>That makes two of us (c:Risshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16582122840116012400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4996632091300076185.post-29718438834099522032008-04-23T20:43:00.000-07:002008-04-23T20:43:00.000-07:00You have a wonderful writing voice and this story ...You have a wonderful writing voice and this story is entirely unique. I can't wait to see where you take it.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00665632105920753931noreply@blogger.com